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in the hotel staring at the view
i don't have to impress anyone
i don't have to be anywhere
i don't have to do anything
i can just stare
at the boats on the water


for this one moment i am alone
for this one moment no one is telling me where to go
what to do
who to be
what to say
what to write
what to think
what is right
what is wrong
with what i do or how i act

free
i am absolutely
totally free
from everything.
it is.
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:icongshakespeare:
GShakespeare Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student Filmographer
Ah, this is a nice feeling.
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:icongulleko:
Gulleko Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think most of us have a lot of demands and stress weighing us down, so when a moment like this appears, you cherish it.
A very short story, but a true one.
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:iconwillheim:
willheim Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Professional Artist
better short.
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:iconmadmaninthebox:
MadManInTheBox Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You should make this into a song, if it isn't already. Something with piano and acoustic guitar, with strings in the background.
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:icondreadpirateme:
DreadPirateMe Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Caught between expectation and desire again, eh?
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:iconwillheim:
willheim Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Professional Artist
Always trying to not want to want. Crazy.
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:icondatbrass:
DatBrass Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice poem. but.. wut?
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