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September 6, 2012
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stars, moon, crickets
stars, moon, crickets
hoot owl
stars, moon, crickets
stop
everything stop
stop it
everything stop
chords, melody, rhythm
chords, melody, rhythm
flow, linearity, transparency
unwavering
free
no more
no more more
no more
empty, full, silence
empty, full, silence
never going back
never the same again
empty, full, silence,
chords, melody, rhythm,
stars, moon, crickets
never going back
never going back
i don't exist
ground zero
empty, full, silence
never going back
never the same again
let myself out of jail
that i put myself in
moon, stars, silence,
crickets, rhythm, empty
full, even, endless
flow never ending
never going back
free.
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:iconbeastialmoon:
BeastialMoon Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
That was beautiful.
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PurpleBolt Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
We love you willheim!. Keep up the good work !
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bobtehnoob-1337 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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Space.
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:iconastral-specs:
Astral-Specs Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's a poet who just didn't know it!
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NurioMarayana Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If I had to wager a guess...

It's about severing yourself from earthly bounds and attaining complete zen and spiritual freedom.
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Dogman15 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Why not submit this as a poetry deviation and not a journal?
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:icondogman15:
Dogman15 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
"Stars doing nothing." Okay then.
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:icondogman15:
Dogman15 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Whoops! I'm sorry! I misread "dogs" as "doing". "Stars dogs nothing." Never mind! There's no verb.
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fatbeardC34 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
You're definitely getting better at your poetry. The flow and diction here is very nice.
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is... Interesting. Not bad, but... Interesting. ^_^
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